The morning classes were flexible but focussed, and we got a lot of work done. It was very instructive for me, not only getting feedback on my own writing, but also to hear Barrie’s wise comments and suggestions about the other writers’ work.
I told Barrie that I’d like to try my hand at writing some dialogue, so he suggested that I think of two characters and a subject for them to talk about. I wrote a dialogue that afternoon, and read it to the group the next morning. Barrie pointed out that I had most of a scene already written. I was amazed – but I was keen to develop the ideas that this scene threw up, and by the end of the week I had six or seven scenes at least partially finished. In one week, I had a substantial start on a play – I was impressed by how quickly this happened, compared with novel writing.
The environment of Collaldra is conducive to writing. The air is sweet, the views over wooded mountainsides give space for imagination to take wing, and there are plenty of peaceful corners of the gardens for meditative jotting. In late afternoon, I favoured an old bench against a stone wall facing the low sun, where Princess the cat sometimes joined me.
We visited several good local restaurants for dinner, but my favourite meals were the lunches we ate at a long table set under a wisteria-clad trellis in front of Collaldra, with the sun and the clear air and the great green mountainside before us – and tumbling puppies at our feet.
Philip